The action is kinda confusing, but the picture is well drawn.

I like the contrast between sudden light and dark. Really makes this pop! Especially as a thumb nail in my message board.

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Really nice action. You have framed the main character well. Good stuff bro.

thanks brother. i'm worried that the action around him is too busy, but that was sort of the point.

thanks. what about the action is confusing?

sick action shaun! the drawing is really elegant, dude's foreshortening is just flawless. besides, the black figures really frame him

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Nah I don't think so. If you added action lines it would make it to busy but I think you have it right as it is.

sweet

It isn't so much really the action, because you can see what is happening. I guess I should have said it was difficult to discern the other people in the picture, because of the showing of movement?

Still a great piece. Better inking job than mine, as I'm too afraid to ink too much and mess it up. Then again, I just about color all my pictures, so I add in some of it digitally.

Took me a while to figure out that the other beings are tree like things. Once you make that connection, it makes a load more sense.

(If I may make a suggestion, though the piece is still great, have you tried making the central figure with more darks? He is so while compared to the other figures, he looks kinda odd, though it does make him stand out, which might have been your intent. Just something I wanted to mention is all. Didn't know if you noticed it/did it intentionally.)

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thanks bro! i really love the concept of this one and tried to take it as far as i could without over doing it.

Badass man~! Its chaotic but in a "oh shit son" sorta way^^

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